Fic: Three

[moonshayde]

My contribution to the November DanJan Challenge. Story is ship, Dan/Jan but includes the team.

Title: Three
Author: Moonshayde
Season: Eight
Category: Drama, Angst, A/A
Spoilers: Heroes, Lockdown, Zero Hour, Icon, with minor spoilers from other seasons.
Pairing/Character: Daniel/Janet, Team
Summary: The door to all; the door to one. In the circle, time undone. Past embrace, future gone. Beware the choice; the wishful come. As Daniel hears these words play over and over in his mind, he has to make a decision that could change his life and the lives of his friends forever.
Rating: PG-13

Author's Notes: Written for the November DanJan Challenge: Develop your plot around the number three. It's up to you what the number signifies in your fic, but it must be a crucial element to the storyline.

Thanks Meg for beta-ing this for me, as always.


Disclaimer: Stargate, Stargate SG-1 and all of its characters, titles, names, and back-story are the property of MGM/UA, Double Secret Productions, Gekko Productions, SciFi Channel, and Showtime/Viacom. All other characters, the story idea and the story itself are the sole property of the author. This story cannot be printed anywhere without the sole permission of the author. Realize this is for entertainment purposes only; no financial gain or profit has been gained from this fiction. This story is not meant to be an infringement on the rights of the above-mentioned establishments

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Comments

[autumndandelion.livejournal.com]

LOVE the fic!!! I could totally picture what was happening, like watching an episode. Your attention to detail with the plot and the characters was awesome! Great job with the suspense! Only a couple of times did I even have an idea what was coming next. Thanks for the middle-of-the-night read!

= D

[moonshayde.livejournal.com]

Oh thanks! Yeah, it's a bit cliche. I tend to fall into that when I write anything a little romance-like. I normally like to write regular ol'gen. But it made for a nice change :)

[autumndandelion.livejournal.com]

I didn't think it was cliche. I loved it!

= D

[autumndandelion.livejournal.com]

Oh, and wicked funny how Teal'c is so serious about mastering the art of fooze ball! LMAO!!

[moonshayde.livejournal.com]

I love when unexpected things happen when writing. They tend to be the best :)

[pellucid.livejournal.com]

Oh, goodie!!! A long one! You've just provided my study break for today--I will endeavor to read in pieces to break up the day of mad productivity that I'm going to have! ;)

[moonshayde.livejournal.com]

Yes! Mad productivity. We will triumph!

I couldn't throw myself into my studies until the fic stoppes pestering me. Very sad.

[pellucid.livejournal.com]

Okay, so I didn't exactly break it into little bits to last me all day; when I got to the second "little bit" I got so swept up in the story that I just finished it! So wonderful!!! As always, it was fantastically well-written, and your characterization of Daniel was spot-on. But the thing that really got me was that through Daniel's realization that Janet wouldn't want other people to die so that she could be saved, and that it was okay to let her go, I found myself really unable to figure out whether you were going to bring her back or not in the end--and what's more, I wasn't sure it would have mattered a lot if she had stayed dead because you had dealt with the larger issues. Of course, I was overjoyed when she wasn't, and I did suspect and hope that's where you were going!!! Because Heroes fix-its are nearly always preferable to dead!Janet fics, in my mind! ;)

And now back to work!

[moonshayde.livejournal.com]

Thanks, I am glad you enjoyed!

I prefer happy endings myself, but I wrote it so it could go either way. I know its a bit of a cliche theme so I wanted to put int a little guesswork and I did really need for it to be deeper. I needed Daniel to walk away with something that could change him.

Personally, I think it would be better as a sad little fic where Daniel learns to let go but Meg wouldn't let me ;)

[pellucid.livejournal.com]

Well, good for Meg! ;)

I mean yes, sad, angsty fics do have their place, of course, but I'm glad this one had a happy ending!

[whisper99.livejournal.com]

Oh my goodness! You made me CRY! When he went back and realized Jack was dead! Oh my goodness!! *SOB!* You done good! I loved it!!!!!!!!

[moonshayde.livejournal.com]

Aw, why thank you!