Okay, so I didn't exactly break it into little bits to last me all day; when I got to the second "little bit" I got so swept up in the story that I just finished it! So wonderful!!! As always, it was fantastically well-written, and your characterization of Daniel was spot-on. But the thing that really got me was that through Daniel's realization that Janet wouldn't want other people to die so that she could be saved, and that it was okay to let her go, I found myself really unable to figure out whether you were going to bring her back or not in the end--and what's more, I wasn't sure it would have mattered a lot if she had stayed dead because you had dealt with the larger issues. Of course, I was overjoyed when she wasn't, and I did suspect and hope that's where you were going!!! Because Heroes fix-its are nearly always preferable to dead!Janet fics, in my mind! ;)
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Date: 2005-11-26 08:33 pm (UTC)And now back to work!