SPN Fic: Unfree Spirit

[moonshayde]

This is super short, so not really a fic, but I keep promising someone I'll finish my SPN fic and I keep dragging my feet...

I don't foresee me being as prolific with Supernatural as SG-1, just like I've written for Smallville before and that's been short. I also don't expect to be writing as much fanfic as I used to period, but regardless I do have a site where I'll be keeping what I have written: http://www.geocities.com/celtic_mysts/supernatural.html

Title: Unfree Spirit
Author: Moonshayde
Season: Three
Category: Angst, Missing Scene
Spoilers: Mystery Spot
Summary: Whether in Hell or on Earth, their spirits can never be free.
Word Count: 189
Rating: PG

Disclaimer: Supernatural and its characters are the property of Eric Kripke and co. All other characters, the story idea and the story itself are the sole property of the author. This is for entertainment purposes only; no financial profit has been gained from this story. This story is not mean to infringe upon the rights of the above-mentioned establishments.



The sound of the crackling fire assailed his ears, burning a scar deep into his memory, one he knew that he would carry forever.

Sam watched the flames flicker, licking the cold night air, as they danced towards the heavens. He should be watching the upward march of free souls, spirits that would unite in the celestial dome above.

But Heaven didn't welcome the bound souls, the unfree.

Dean's spirit would never find solace. It would burn. It would howl. It would change.

It would be tormented for all time until there was nothing left but an angry coldness that not even the fires could touch.

Sam rubbed his thumb over the horned face of Dean's amulet. He choked back a sob that tried to break his resolve, and slipped the amulet over his head. As the remains of his brother continued to burn, he held onto the amulet and made himself a vow.

Sam wouldn't let his own spirit rest until he could make right what was wrong. He was bound to his duty, and he would see it through until the very end.

No matter the cost.

Comments

[meg-tdj.livejournal.com]

Dude... this seriously made me cry. *sniffle*

Poor Sam!!! *cuddles him*

But YAAAAAAAAY!!! You wrote SPN fic!!! SAM POV!!!!!!!!!! *dances* :D

[moonshayde.livejournal.com]

Yay! Glad you liked. I've wanted to do something for a while. It would have been nice if it wanted to be longer, though.

Mystery Spot is an awesome episode for psychological exploration. I love thinking on it.

Hopefully, I can do the same for Dean sometime with one of his episodes.

[lark_ascends]

Fabulous visuals.

[moonshayde.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much :)

[withdiamonds.livejournal.com]

This is really good. Mystery Spot fascinates me, the differences in the experiences they both had. This is a great exploration of that.

[moonshayde.livejournal.com]

Mystery Spot fascinates me, too. SPN is the type of show that generally wraps things up neatly, but there is so much to explore in that episode. Plus, the emotional impact is just amazing.

Thanks for reading :)

[iamstealthyone.livejournal.com]

I definitely ache for Sam here. Being left behind, knowing what will happen to Dean if he can't free Dean ... *hugs him*

Nicely done.

[moonshayde.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Poor Sam. It truly was an awesome episode.

[jessm78.livejournal.com]

Oh.... WOW.

It may be short, but you've managed to convey just so much into so few words. The fate that awaits Dean's soul, and how it's affecting Sam...especially how he is taking on his brother's legacy.

Beautiful job! :)

[moonshayde.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much. That is exactly what I was hoping for. I wanted it to be longer, but it just wanted to stay short and to the point. I'm glad it worked on that level for you :)

And thanks for reading!

[jessm78.livejournal.com]

My pleasure. :)

[platysseus.livejournal.com]

Wow... and reading this for the first time after seeing the finale, I'm starting to feel a little weepy. *sneezes* Or, it's just my cold. ;)

Dean's spirit would never find solace. It would burn. It would howl. It would change.
Nah... I'm getting weepy. :( Ouch, that paragraph bites.

Great work.

[moonshayde.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I'm still fairly new to the fandom aspect of SPN, fic included, but I am proud of the way it came out.

:)

[a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com]

Damn... DAMN, I...

*Hugs you fiercely*

[moonshayde.livejournal.com]

Oh thank you :) That was my first SPN fic ever, I think. I appreciate the comment.