Date: 2008-03-27 03:39 am (UTC)
Hmm, so is Dean really possessed, or is Sam wrong on this one? I know what it seems like at the end, but I’m not entirely sure, and I like that. I like that you’ve built up a lot of doubt. It makes for good tension.

Favorite lines:

Sam easily reached over and gave the cord a swift tug. When she scrambled to grab it, he tossed the cord aside. "You're not listening to me," he said coolly.

I like that Sam’s done with trying to be soft and soothing with her.

"What do you want?"

Dean shrugged. "Hot pastrami sandwich. Maybe some Combos."


*snickers*

Or you could always throw some holy –"

Sam tossed holy water in Dean's face.


I really like how you wrote that, going from mid-dialogue to Sam’s actions.
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