Very good! While the idea for the fic itself was good, the description of Ashrimin was excellent! It's important when writing aliens that one writes in the way an alien would think (that is, in an alien way) - this, I think, is too rarely not accomplished. You do it well. =)
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Date: 2006-05-14 09:40 am (UTC)