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Invisible Friend ([identity profile] el1ie.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] moonshayde 2005-06-22 02:59 pm (UTC)

Great story.

I particularly liked the SGC scenes and the actual drive....very visual and the character voices were dead to rights.

Very nice to find Teal'c in a good J/D piece too and he was very believable here, like the show he has become more wiley and human and I liked his parts very much.

As the story rolled along it just got better and better, the comedy was light and funny and Sam and Daniel together were a riot.

Of course the D/J scenes were the best parts and again you painted some very nice scenes with wonderful dialogue and as strange as it may seem - facial expressions! Yep...love a confused and pissed Daniel.

Thanks very much for sharing - it's been a while since I had the time to sit down and read again and finding something like this has make me want to find more.

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