ext_43898 ([identity profile] fiesty-red.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] moonshayde 2008-11-02 02:58 pm (UTC)

Great story!

I like how the house digs up your own fears and demons rather than just scaring you with the ghosts of its former inhabitants. You did a great job of portraying Alec. Bringing Rachel and Ben to confront him about what he fears most was the right punch in the gut and it hurts.

Thanks for sharing, sweetie! ^_^

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