Ooh, this was really nice! And you say you have trouble with short fic.

The idea of the team being in stasis too was clever, and you expressed it very well. And it was nice to see them being a team despite all very much having their own things going on, in the canon. I liked Daniel trying so hard to find a way to communicate with Jack despite the impossible, and that Jack eventually did get the message, even if it was a little late.

And Teal'c! The hair! The Star Wars reference. Classic.

This was a really great piece...thanks for posting it!